Gabo Gulbenkian - Explorers (2012)

I wrote something like this and I want each of you has expressed opinions.

I resolution mitigate you create more poems.

Thanks in speed

"Flatliners

Painted dash. Do not curt
Not long on a spotless canvas
dismiss with goose feathers
no yellow represent ultramarine

A moment uneven it appeared
though undulating, undernourished
river in the middle of the glacier
of high-flying birds seen wandering

Was to conjoin the two green dots
but to a certain extent as two red spots
the ra somewhere else in the galaxy
heaven.

She was alone in the cadaverous like an arrow
without the mainsail without ailerons
without origin, without put paid to "